Essay Poster Project 5

 

Outline

Day 3 I start class with playing pop music and just ask students to get out their bookmarks and brainstorming paper. Most are prepared. I check to make sure they have attempted the homework and written questions. I give feedback for them to further develop some sentences.

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My students have a difficult time categorizing ideas when using English. They get so caught up in choosing the correct verb tense or vocabulary word, they can’t see the forest for the trees. To help the students categorize their brainstorming ideas and then to further prioritize them, I ask students to connect ideas by drawing inclusive circles of similar ideas. This is really difficult for them. They have no where to start. I read some of theirs off, asking the student and the surrounding students if they think two ideas are similar or not. After each answer I elicit, I ask them to “categorize” another idea. “Does it fit with this idea or that? Why?” Light bulbs go off; students usually physically sit up straighter, almost jump out of their seats, when they “get it.”

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After working on this for about 15 minutes, I hand out a blank piece of A4 paper to everyone. Stopping the music, I ask the students to fold the paper to make five sections and demonstrate the
folding technique.

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I ask the students to write “introduction” in the top section and “conclusion” in the bottom. I then ask them to write their sentences from their diagram into the three sections making sure to put similar items only in each section.

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After another 10 minutes, I tell them they just completed step 3 of the writing process – outlining. I refer them to the book mentioned there are several ways to outline. I then ask them to write their essay for homework and give them guidelines by writing them on the board. They need to have five paragraphs. They need an introduction paragraph with a hook and a thesis statement. They need three supporting paragraphs. They need a concluding paragraph.

At this point many students are hooked into the process and have big gaps between what we have done and what I am asking them to do? Thesis? What’s a thesis? I give them some page numbers in the textbook to find out and practice. Hook? What is a hook? I tell them they need to find out and tell me tomorrow. I encourage them just to write what they think I want. I tell them to trust themselves and just try.

The rough draft is a tough homework assignment for them, especially as they only have one night to write it. My expectation is that all will attempt, but most will not finish. This is OK for our process. I have different levels of students and by this time I work with the students individually in class and encourage them to do what they can do. I was thinking that some of the students would shut down by this time if they were really not already advanced English language learners. I had prepared specific activities in the textbook for those who would be unable to meet the step goals.

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